It all started in a blue deep and violent lake. The moon was high and the stars were bright. A lonely light was stranded by itself. As she shined so bright with no purpose in her unlived life. The sudden spark had zapped a purpose in her life. She opened her eyes as she started to shine, a mysterious green light was spreading hope in Gatsby's life. As Gatsby looked into her eyes he saw a life that was desired, he reached so far, but couldn't grasp the mistress in his blurry eyes.
Chapter one
It was a dark day and Gatsby went for a walk. He didn't know what he was going to encounter. As he walked by his glorious kingdom that was built from the ashes, he caught a peculiar sight. At the far end of the lake he saw a beautiful, mysterious light, she wasn't like any other light, she was green, joyful, and full of hope. As he approached the shore, Gatsby was mesmerized by the beautiful yet deadly light. As he went closer and closer, till he could feel the water slowly consuming his elegant yet expensive shoes, he started into the hypnotizing light. Behind the light, there was another kingdom. Its tall yet magnificent walls were built from marble, the elegant statues of the woman were carefully carved into the wall, and the gardens were as big as an infinite maze of endless routes. It was shining with gold. From every window, he could see the movement of people waltzing like it was their last day, yet from all those people he saw one and only person. It was a woman. A woman of his dreams was there so beautiful she was glowing, her eyes were diamond blue, her skin was pale like silver, her rosy cheeks and cupid lips were rubies in his eyes, he saw her smile and there he stood mesmerized by the sight.
The green lady was lonely for a long time. She was always lonely until one day. When she saw that smiling man called Gatsby the only one she ever wanted. He wasn't tall but wasn't short. He was skinny but not too skinny and yet she fell for him. She would shine for him and only him, she was driven by the desire for him to see her. She was just a light, a plain old light but when he looked at her she felt as though he admired her.
Gatsby saw the light but after seeing the woman of his life he saw the light as a path. He wanted to get there and he wanted to reach for her and grasp her. The lady with a golden aura stood behind the green light. The green didn't know but felt that there was something else that Gatsby was hiding behind those eyes.
Chapter 2
Gatsby fell in love with a woman with a golden aura.
Her name was Daisy, like the flower. She was from an old kingdom. She was nice and pretty overall, and though she had a husband and daughter, she was beautifully upset that she wasn't thinking straight. The new kingdoms on the other side looked magnificent. She always wanted to visit one. The one, in particular, she always wanted to visit was a mansion just across from her. A giant, beautiful and modern mansion. It was three stories high and you can see the light shining from every window every night. You can hear people yelling happily, and music playing so loud that you can hear on the other side of the lake. Her husband was Tom and he was a monster in her eyes. He was hulking, his eyebrows were in a constant “hmp” position, and he looked very wise but his brain was not. He was a man with money, he didn't care about feelings, and even worse he didn't know what other feelings are if it wasn't his. He would constantly abuse Daisy, and she only married to keep the legacy of golden auras. She wanted to escape from these old marble walls and run away, but where? And with whom? Would she run away with it? She didn't know that the key to an escape lives right across from her.
Chapter 3
Gatsby and Daisy knew each other for a long time, in fact, they were a thing back in the years. The lack of a golden aura is what has set them apart. Gatsby was devastated but he didn't lose his motivation and he set himself up for success with a huge mansion right across the daisy. Of course, he didn't know that it was Daisy's mansion until he saw that green beautiful light on her shore.
Chapter 4
Every night the green light saw gatsby reaching for her. Every night the light believed that he was reaching for her, she wanted to escape, and the thought of being with Gatsby was making her brighter and brighter. Gatsby on the other hand didn't see the green lady he only saw a green light and what was behind it. Daisy. The brighter the green light shined for him the more he thought he is getting closer to daisy.
Chapter 5
It was some time and the light didn't see gatsby anymore. time to time there was a party but lately, it was only one window that had light in it. She was curious as to why gatsby has not paid any attention to her. Until one day she was the woman, the golden woman, she was alive and beautiful. The green lady got furious and heartbroken, she felt used. The green light wanted revenge. She knew that the golden lady had a husband. So she spotted him on the deck and she shinned in the direction of gatsby's house. Tom was looking around his house until he saw a single green starin of light pointing at the mansion just across his. And there he saw Daisy, with another man. He saw everything and the light helped him see more, the way she looked at him, the way she loved him, the way she wanted to run away, and... and the way she hated him. Tom was upset he felt as heartbroken as the green light and at that moment that green light he saw turned into a beautiful and pretty lady. Her eyes were like emeralds her skin is silky smooth. she came down to him and told him "revenge". Tom knew what she meant and he grabbed a gun and he and the lady went across to the great gatsby's house. As they got there, daisy and gatsby were talking about running far far away, tom heard all the details and the green lady said 'do it" tom walked into the room and pulled a trigger ending both gatsby's and Daisy's life. In shock, tom realized what he had done and there saw the beautiful emerald-green eyes lady leaving. He chased her crying and screaming at her. He saw her at the shore and he ran until the water started to be unbearable to walk in and he started to swim, but he saw the lady walk as though she was a holly entity above the water. They made eye contact and tom felt something as the water consumed him, water filling up his lungs and him reaching up to the lady to be saved as he took his last breath.
So the green lady wept and shinned of grief as both mansions that were gold became worn down. The green lady was shining till the gold was back and a new man have seen her light and reached for her once again...
This was very entertaining to read! I love how crazy the ending is, when Tom is coerced by the green light lady. I think it's interesting how you started at the beginning of the story rather than near the end, since lots of fanfiction is focused on changing the end of the story. I love how you described Tom as "looked very wise but his brain was not". Wonderful!
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