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The beginning It all started in a blue deep and violent lake. The moon was high and the stars were bright. A lonely light was stranded by itself. As she shined so bright with no purpose in her unlived life. The sudden spark had zapped a purpose in her life. She opened her eyes as she started to shine, a mysterious green light was spreading hope in Gatsby's life. As Gatsby looked into her eyes he saw a life that was desired, he reached so far, but couldn't grasp the mistress in his blurry eyes. Chapter one It was a dark day and Gatsby went for a walk. He didn't know what he was going to encounter. As he walked by his glorious kingdom that was built from the ashes, he caught a peculiar sight. At the far end of the lake he saw a beautiful, mysterious light, she wasn't like any other light, she was green, joyful, and full of hope. As he approached the shore, Gatsby was mesmerized by the beautiful yet deadly light. As he went closer and closer, till he could feel the water ...



This is so cool! I love how you employed what you learned from McCloud's comic that we read in class. The drawings were pretty funny and cute; it made me smile. Which drawing software do you use? The art is really good!
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DeleteI love this so much!!! I really liked how you used what we talked about in class and made it into something so creative!! I thought your story was really cute and amusing. And your drawings are great too!
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